“Are you telling this story, or am I?”

The other night I had the image in my head of Spark asking Vahaadi to tell her a story before bed. He kind of rolls his eyes (with a smile, though, because by now he’s decided he likes her) and says something like “are you five?” she responds “hmmm…YES!” so he sits by her bed and starts to tell her a story and she interrupts to add her own twist and he says something like “are you telling this story, or am I?” and she says she’s helping, so he keeps telling the story with her “help.” They spend all night telling each other stories.

Of course Spark starts with her favorite comic books but she could have the pleasure of describing every Disney movie and all the classic fairytales, and he’d be able to tell her the stories he learned from the troupe, and since there’s only so many plots, their stories would remind each other of OTHER stories they know, so they’d just talk and talk and talk and talk forever with her laying on her side with her big eyes sparkling and him sitting on the floor beside her bed and they don’t even realize how much time has passed until Vahaadi realizes sunlight is beginning to glow outside the window.

Normally when I think of little interaction scenes for them I don’t imagine making them appear in the actual narrative, but I think this one probably should. It would be a nice way to show their relationship, AND, it could be a sort of foreshadowing of how Vahaadi is going to be a “narrator.”

I think it would also be good to show how they can be intellectually intimate without being physically intimate. Also, I think there’s an interesting sort of visual metaphor in him sitting beside her bed on the floor.

He’s lower than her, which indicates a sort of subservience, and he’s not IN her bed, which could really give the wrong idea, but he’s sitting really close, like someone watching at the bed of a sick person. So, maybe this is weird, I just think visually it would represent how he serves her but cares for her.

And of course having her on her side (and, I picture her wiggled up close, too) shows how much she adores him.