style

I notice as I am putting this together that two things basically came out of this.  Composition and Line Thickness/thinness are my weakest points, color being a close third.  I am too impulsive and whimsical in my art and would benefit from thinking more before I start drawing.  I would also benefit from focusing long enough and maintaining enough discipline to add more details/change brush sizes even to simple sketches.  I think then my desired results would be much more within my reach.