Took: Getting on in Years

The pics I drew of him balding at 30 were just do gross to share. DX  I feel like these barely look like him and yet, they do…let’s just say he’s killing the old villainous dude look. In his 40s his hair would still have color. But by the time he reaches the age in the pic on the right (60s?) it would be all washed out. Fortunately, I think in his 30s his acne finally chills out. Then he has to start dealing with facial hair. XD WHICH HE IMMENSELY PREFERS. Finally, he’ll have the villainous beard he’s always wanted.
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Tulio Took (Tookio? Tokyo? Rio, France, Meet Me in Mexico?)

Traced some Tulio faces, then modified them to get Took! Took differs from Tulio in his more angular jaw line, ridiculous (RIDICULOUS) hairstyle, bigger/taller ears, bags under the eyes, weird forked eyebrows, and upturned nose, so I worked those in to see what I’d get. Even though all those traits sound ugly/weird, all together on the “Tulio” base they actually look cute and funny! I learned a lot from doing this! I’m not sure yet if it’s quite perfect since it’s not truly my style, but it’s fun to look at. I need to do these more often. I particularly like the shape of the eyes–they’re way more expressive that the eyes I usually draw.

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The Piper

Idea dump for things we’ve played with for our villain, “Piper” (for now)

 

Motivation:

The Piper was once a Narrator, a special Character that helps other Characters figure out their Stories.  He traveled in the form of a bard, and would meet Characters at critical points in their lives to tell stories, sing songs, and otherwise provide them with clues. Like a prophet, he knows the will of God (the Author) without actually BEING God.  However, he drastically misunderstood the nature of the Author and the Stories and wanted to “break out” and control his own destiny, and help others to do the same.  He has seen so many “stories” “go wrong” that he thinks he ought to make them better.  To do so, his plan is to make a perfect world by drawing out some things that he likes from the various canons, and causing the bad to fold in on itself and be destroyed.

 

Powers:

He can move freely between canons, and he can move characters and objects between canons as well. Because he doesn’t use his powers the way he’s supposed to (to help characters fulfill some destiny predetermined by the Author) his dabbling in the canons causes corruption, which can “infect” characters, turn them into corruption monsters, and ultimately kill them.

He can use music to “write” his own reality, which he can exert onto other people in a hypnotic mind control simply by singing or playing an instrument.

 

Supporters and Underlings:

I see the Piper’s underlings coming in two flavors: a motley crew of sentient supporters (ala Organization XIII), and corruption monsters.

The crew is comprised of characters the Piper led from their own canons, perhaps when they were children.  They vary in loyalty and devotion to the Piper’s cause. To some of them he’s probably like a father figure, but others are suspicious of just how much control he has over them with his music.  He has probably led most to believe he saved them (and maybe he did) but others he may have abducted and brainwashed (like the children of Hamlin). Since they are from many different canons, they will seem like a dark version of the Lorewalkers. They vary in race, background, powers, etc.  They handle the finer details of the Piper’s plan that the corruption monsters aren’t capable of, but not so important that the Piper attends to them personally.

The corruption monsters are non-sentient beings formed by the chaos of the Piper’s ill-used power.  They do not think, they only destroy. They may have once been living creatures, but they aren’t alive in any meaningful way anymore. As a visual reinforcement of the Piper legend, they tend to resemble rats, but their bodies are made of “corruption”: paper, ink, smoke, stone, any media used to record stories. They are disgusting and will “eat” anything, but in the presence of the Piper they act like loyal pets.

 

Appearance:

Fabulous hat. Very important. I imagine he’s tall and quite thin, and in keeping with the icon of the Pied Piper, he wears two-toned clothes. I think he has the look of a bard from a fantasy game. I liked the idea of associating him visually with magpies, which are highly intelligent birds and the name magpie comes from the same root that “Pied” comes from (meaning two colors). Magpies are also associated with bad luck, a group is called a murder, and there’s a really cool rhyme called “One for Sorrow” that would be cool to incorporate into our design for him somehow. He probably has instruments, at least a flute/pipe.

 

Dynamics:

He probably has a connection to the Merchant of Lost Things, another Narrator.  However, I want the Merchant to be a pretty peripheral characters so we may never explore this much.

Unlike Spark and Vahaadi, he is calm, mature, and methodical. He has a special connection/appeal to children, which he exploits.  He does not consider Spark and Vahaadi a threat.  In fact, they are almost entirely off his radar for a long while–a sign of his confidence in his plan.  When Spark does finally get his attention, he proves to be far more formidable than she thought. Spark experiences a devastating defeat, while the Piper merely enjoys a mildly amusing game and kindly suggests she not get in his way again. Because she is so childlike, the Piper is able to use his hypnotic influence to confuse her and get into her head.  He takes advantage of her love of fun, destructive tendencies, and shaky standing with the Lorewalkers. As a particularly alarming show of his power, and to really mess with her head, he uses his music to lure her into committing an evil, destructive, but thrilling and fun act.  When she tries to be outraged, he tells her he wasn’t controlling her. He merely planted the idea and she acted on it of her own accord.

Either way, this incident is bad news.  Either the Piper has a terrible capacity to control her, or she has a terrible capacity for evil on her own.  Ultimately, the Piper doesn’t see her as a threat because she’s practically on his side anyway, since she causes so much trouble for the Lorewalkers.  This will cause a serious struggle for Spark, who wants to believe that she is a good, strong, fun, powerful hero, while owning up to the fact that it’s all too easy to make her go berserk.

(additional elements of the story to underscore this struggle is Vahaadi’s experience as a reforming villain, and the existence of Ignite, who provides a glimpse of what Spark would be like if she went off the rails on the crazy train)

Character Survey: Vahaadi

1. People don’t behave the same way all the time. In fact, they generally have a mask for every social group — friends, family, business. Sometimes they have a different mask for different groups of friends. How does your character act around different people? How does their personality shift and change?
Vahaadi acts very differently depending on who he’s around. To his friends, he’s playful and casual. He usually manages to maintain a suave, bad-boy air, but at the smallest show of affection he’ll melt. His gaze is warm, his touches are petting, and he tends to be more expressive in his body language. People he doesn’t like get treated with a passive-aggressive snarkiness and even cruelty. He uses touch to harass and subtly threaten. Around men he’s attracted to, he’s submissive, coaxing and serious. Smiles are rare and eye contact is carefully calculated. The worst state to see him in is when he’s strung out on aphrodisiacs, which is his go-to coping method for depression and loneliness. He becomes very sexually solicitous (though not aggressive, since he’s found he gets more attention from playing the lapcat), slinky and raunchy. He usually only lets himself be seen this way by whoremongers and clients. When caught in this state by people he knows, he’s deeply humiliated.

2. Your character has been brought to a party and promptly ditched. They don’t have a ride back home. How does this work? How comfortable are they around all of these strangers? Do they interact?

Freaking Took.

OK, I’ve said it before but I’ll say it again: Took is really easy to write, but really hard to draw. I thought I’d figured him out in these pics:

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But I almost think he’s too cute??? I dunno. I was thinking a longer face might be better, since it would make him look more like Lanthriel, but Lanthriel gets his “longness” from his mom, so…uh. I’m not sure.  I just don’t want him to be cute and generic looking. So here are some sketches and notes! Also, noses. The weird expression in the bottom right was me trying to explore how extreme his faces are.  I think this might be a little too much but it’s funny. XD

 

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I don’t know what’s happening in this picture but I think Took is at work? He must work with other sorcerers and engineers occasionally.  I didn’t really care to figure out what he was doing so I just left the first one as body boxes.  The dialogue came out of nowhere.

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P.S. The Took drawing for your birthday is still in the works! Right now your birthday Took has the long face look pictured above. It’s not quite as angular-cutesy as the face I gave him in the traditional study and the 2011 expression study, but he does look a little more…suave, with the long face? For what that’s worth? It used to be important to me that he looked like a teenager, but that’s not a priority to me, anymore…especially now that I’m much closer to his age (AHAHAHAHA weird thought).

I think I’d like him to have a sort of Disney villain look to him, where he’s not generically attractive but his design *works.* My problem now is that I don’t know how to incorporate the elements I’ve noticed Disney uses to “uglify” their villains (extreme cheek bones, long chins, bags under the eyes, long upper lips) without him looking WAY too old. Quandary >/

Andrayia’s Crush

Evie | My characters rarely surprise me much anymore, but Andrayia definitely got an eyebrow raised when she confessed to me she’s got a crush on Vahaadi but she doesn’t want anyone to know. She’s never met him but she’s seen drawings of him and knows about Loose Canon and she’s glad that he’s going to belong to Spark. She thinks he’s so handsome and best of all he knows how to have a good time, something the people in her world are seriously lacking. I told her LOTS of girls have crushes on Vahaadi as soon as they see him and he’s not interested. She said she knows, but she just had to tell somebody. So. There you have it.

CallyAnn |  Aw. Awwwwww. D: I am surprised, too! But maybe kinda not? I guess my level of surprise varies depending on her level of crush. XD

 I drew a reaction thing but the art isn’t great and I know she doesn’t want anyone to know, but would you be interested in seeing it?

 

Evie |  of course! I think she doesn’t want anyone to know because she thinks Van would be angry and Spark would be jealous, but it’s actually sweet, I think, and I think both Van and Spark would be understanding. But for her sake I haven’t told them. I think it’s okay if you and your characters know, but she wants me to keep it from mine. She figures she will never meet Vahaadi anyway, so it doesn’t matter if he knows. She doesn’t think Took has his heart set on her affections so she doesn’t think it’ll matter to him and she barely knows about Lanthriel and Kala so it’s not really an issue. I think in her mind she kinda believes all of Vahaadi’s far off tales and put together with what I said about lots of girls having crushes on him she thinks she is just one among many (like a belieber– ugh, I just typed that. horrible.)
she thinks Vahaadi looks extremely handsome and she’s never seen anyone so striking that has such a short stature and “I bet he never scowls” and he looks like he knows how to take a compliment and give them too. He also looks like he’s not afraid of anything and …he’s just dreamy. (I’m laughing? But that’s rude to her, I know. She feels so self conscious.) I’d say her level of crush is “twitterpated.”

 

CallyAnn | 
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(Like this is somehow Vahaadi’s fault XD but Vahaadi wouldn’t put it past Van to blame him for stealing the heart of a girl he’s never met)
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(Vahaadi has a knee-jerk reaction to apologize when Took yells [reminiscent of his Sahin days D: ] but these apologies tend to be less than sincere and a little backhanded hahaha )

Evie | AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

WHAT DO YOU MEAN THIS ART IS FANTASTIC

hahahahahahahahah

AHHHHHHHHHH

I JUST LOVE EVERYTHING

I haven’t even shown Andrayia I just love it for me

haha I hope that isn’t bad

I think she’d be very apologetic too

now I will have to draw something in return

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGRAHIGHSABIGOU(UWNHHHHHHHHHHHHH i just love this

I love the little !!! lines in front of vahaadi

if this is what happens when you watch a lot of anime I approve

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CallyAnn |  Of course if Van did find out about Andrayia’s crush and confronted Vahaadi about it, his (bad) response would be,

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Evie |  hahahahahahahaewwwwwwwwwwwwwww

XD

And Van will be like “WHY DID I EVER COME HERE”

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((WEIRD REACTION FACE GO HAHAHAHAHAHA sorry this is so ugly I just couldn’t help it. Van, why are you always the butt of the joke. ))

This is a crazy story

So, I’m on an Ashen Shard kick and trying to figure out what is going on with this weird story.  I did some digging around and found this master timeline. I made some changes to it to reflect updates (Lanthriel was still Progolo in this version @_@ ). Good grief I forgot how robust/complicated this story is, and I never even worked out the meat of the real conflict.