Notes:
Put more teasing emphasis on nicknames to make it clear that they’re nicknames.
Lower volume on all speaking parts EXCEPT Krissy.
Editing things…
Change “Krissy’s mom had nearly died when Krissy said…” to “Her mom had nearly died when Krissy said…”
In future recordings, watch for the number of times you repeat “Krissy.”
Cut down on adverbs and “with –” descriptions.
Change half of my dialogue tags to “said.”
“Hair Dye and her four back-up singers” line has a distinct car sound.
Static-y hiss in Peach’s line.
Lacy’s line is muffled.
Car sound behind “Krissy yelled, shoving Hair Dye away.”